Hi Ray,

I agree with all who said this is a very good song. I won't say your best, because that has yet to come.
And I also enjoyed it a lot. I disagree with some who said you have to bring your vocals more upfront. They were good (and bright).
The lyrics were very good, although I have to admit I didn't understand all of it in terms of text.

Your video was very entertaining and also a big help to read the lyrics.
You did a nice job on that, although you always say you are too lazy to work on those things. Well, now you were probably rested?

And another thing: you always say your vocals are bad. I agreed with that for a long time, but now I think they are well suited for this kind of music, Ray. So now you can allow yourself to say you can sing!

Have a nice weekend,
Hans

Hans Berkhout
(Birchwood)
https://soundcloud.com/user-296497130