The rain is WAY too loud and hissy at the beginning of the track.
The song, once passed that section, is clear and sweet.
It'd have been helpful for you to have posted just the one song as an introduction to yourself and your music.
There're a few clicks that could be addressed - some may be intentional and part of rhythm accompaniment but they sound like they're a little loud and out of place.

Last edited by rayc; 10/09/21 03:46 PM.
Cheers
rayc
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