Originally Posted By: Rustyspoon#
Ray,
Very cool stuff. A bit more than just a sketch smile
I like it as a whole. Strong lyrics/ phrasing. I read it in the morning, but was guessing what it will sound like within context.
My take.... polish mix, bring out vocals a little and call it done. Your vocals are GOOD! Excellent composition and arrangement too. I really see no point of re-inventing it, at least this version. Again, I think it only needs a mix and maybe optional couple of vocal re-takes. Your voice does work well on it! Good one. Thank you for sharing.
Misha.

Thank you Misha,
I'll give it a go based on your say so.

Cheers
rayc
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