Originally Posted By: NigelSpiers
Hi Ray,
This is a good rocker.
I agree with above comments - I would bring up volume of the vocals a touch so we can hear the lyrics.
Well done.

Best Regards
Nigel

Thanks Nigel,
I would've brought the vocals forward had it been a keeper but I saw/see it as a place holder.
It doesn't quite rock the way I imagined...the narrative and melody pull it back towards something that may be power pop IF there was a sparkling vocalist.


Cheers
rayc
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