I like the passion in your voice with this one. You throw everything at a song every now and then and this is a now.

Cool chord progression. I do wish BIAB had some better rock guitars - they opt for "hiGain" fizzy ones in the main. You've done an ace job with what is available..the added percussion lifts this a little more. The solo tone was pretty good. My suggestion, given you've used these, is do apply a cab sim to each guitar instance in your DAW...they'll reduce the fizz and add a little grunt.

The lyrics are brief but to the point...there's no need to paint an huge canvas when you can communicated the story succinctly.

Mind you, I suspect I'd have enjoyed this just as much if you'd used a skiffle group.


Cheers
rayc
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