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#678733 10/22/21 03:37 AM
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Jack and Jill

Lyrcis are within the SoundCloud page. Constructive feedback on all aspects of song, particularly, lyrics and melody, requested.

Na zdrowie!

Dewey

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Hey there, Michigander!

Superb vocal. Sweet harmonies.

Engaging lyrics/story and melody. I like a good song about a women who loves 'em and leaves 'em.

A real sh*t kicker of a song.

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Dewey,

A great fun song. Loved your excellent vocal and the mix.

Very nice work.

Bob

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Fun song!!! Really well written and produced!! Lyrics are fresh and interesting, and the vocal is very well done!! Take care. Greg

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That is a really well written narrative.
The melody and singing aren't slouching either.


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Dewey_MI #678926 10/23/21 03:39 AM
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A fun song for sure, Dewey. Love those lyrics, and the response harmony. Excellent vocals, and the melody is absolutely perfect. I had a Jill crush even before we went to school, and Mary Jane is still a close friend. Never liked Jack though.


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Dewey_MI #678931 10/23/21 04:02 AM
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A fun song, Dewey. Nicely put together.

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nice clear vocs.
like the lyrics and tempo.
like the quirkiness and thought that went into the song//lyrics.

fun song.
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om


my songs....mixed for good earbuds...(fyi..my vocs on all songs..)
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(lots of tips of mine in pg tips forum.)
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Thank you for all the kind words everyone!

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Very well done!
Instrumentation and vocals working together nicely.

moto

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Hi Dewey,

Entertaining song and well sung.
Reminds me somewhat of The Tractors.

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Nigel


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A fun song, great lyrics all wrapped up in an excellent story.


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I'm proud to say that the NSAI song evaluator for "Jack And Jill" marked this song as "One to Watch" today! Thanks again for everyone who listened and gave their feedback.

Na zdrowie!

Dewey

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