Originally Posted By: floyd jane
Ray,
COOL. Listened several times.
Bravo to you for stretching and experimenting! Interesting! to say the least!!!
A few thoughts - (opinions. "I think"'s...)
The vocals should come up just a bit.
The pads and other "different" tracks should be a bit more subtle - more in-the-background.
The bass is VERY cool - but I thought (see) that it should be a-bit-more-defined in its mid-range.
This screams for some contemporary percussion (though you might be strongly opposed to that) - some off-beat kicks, some fingersnaps, some soft claps, etc.
Misha's guitars sound great!
I like it. A lot!
fj

Thanks FJ,
I'll try those things & suss out if they fit in my head as well as the song.
The bass...it's odd...it holds the bottom end because the drums don't have a real thump in the kick. I'll tweak.

Cheers
rayc
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