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i like the starting energy of the song...
and the chorus.
just an idea...cymbals i found up too high.
loved that last note of the song.

best
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my songs....mixed for good earbuds...(fyi..my vocs on all songs..)
https://soundcloud.com/alfsongs
(90 songs created useing bb/rb)
(lots of tips of mine in pg tips forum.)