what i like about this is everything is in its place.
for example you kept the drums very subtle which is what the song calls for imho. i really like that aspect of the song.

nice stop/change at 2/20. nice dynamics at 3/46 on.

well done.
om


my songs....mixed for good earbuds...(fyi..my vocs on all songs..)
https://soundcloud.com/alfsongs
(90 songs created useing bb/rb)
(lots of tips of mine in pg tips forum.)