Originally Posted By: Deej56
Ray,
Listened to version 2. A lot of good stuff going on in this one so far. Opening up, I was wondering if the pace of that first verse could be sustained throughout the whole song, but the shift into the lead guitar before the first chorus works pretty well. Some great dimension in the instrumental mix—starting with that haunting organ. Keep working it!
All my best,
Deej

Thanks Deej,
Yes, keeping the dynamics and pace across six minutes is an interesting & taxing conundrum.
It'll develop slowly.

Last edited by rayc; 11/24/21 11:04 PM.

Cheers
rayc
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