Nice from the start. Well produced and emotionally sung. Very pretty and heartfelt.

The acoustic guitar is as a standout.

I hope you don't mind me mentioning, because telling someone how to sing or talk is a sensitive sort of thing. But if you re-record the vocals, there are a few words you may want to work on.

"Center" needs an /r/ added to the end, or it comes out as "Santa", which had me puzzled for a moment. It doesn't have to be a hard /r/ - you use the softer British /r/ instead - but it should be there.

On "without" and "nothing", you're devoicing the /th/, so it comes out as an /s/.

Anyway, I like this song a lot. Good job! laugh

-- David Cuny
My virtual singer development blog

Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?