Hi, all:
Well, I’m not sure I should post this one quite yet . . . but the reality is I don’t know what else to do with it, notwithstanding reservations. So I'm looking for input on what’s lacking and how I can make it pop more. As always, your feedback is greatly appreciated. Thanks much!
Deej
Here’s the song:I'LL NEVER BE THE SAME Here are the lyrics:She was more than just a lover
She was all I ever dreamed
She made me feel like Elvis
In a crowd of teenage screams
But she wrapped me round her finger
She played my precious heart
That demon girl rocked my world
Then tore it all apart
She’s moving on
She’s moving on
And I don’t want to talk about the state I’m in
About the man I oughta be, about the man I’ve been
I don’t need your perspective on the worth of change
‘Cause she hit me like a hurricane
And I’ll never be the same
Well I found her down in Memphis
In a bar on Vance and Main
She was hunting the defenseless
Some new boy she could tame
I took her by the hand
Whispered ‘Babe, I want you still’
She told me I should disappear
I’m thinking that I will
I’m getting gone
I’m getting gone
And I don’t want to talk about the state I’m in
About the man I oughta be, about the man I’ve been
I don’t need your perspective on the worth of change
‘Cause she left me in the pouring rain
And I’ll never be the same
Waiting all your life to find the perfect lover
Basking in her light, then one day you discover
She's slipping out of sight and messing with another
And you ain’t got the strength to stop
Her wicked world of pain
Here’s the band:RealTracks 995: Bass, Electric, Hard Rock LA
RealTracks 3733: Guitar, Electric, Rhythm GrungeRockArp
RealTracks 2758 Guitar, Electric, Rhythm Rock Heavy 8ths Murray
RealTracks 998: Guitar, Electric,Rhythm HardRock LA Crisp
RealTracks 2586: Guitar, Soloist, PunkMurray
RealDrums: Rock Hard Modern