Hi deej,

I'm with Mario: I wouldn't change a thing.

I mean, one can always imagine something he would have done differently, but even if I do, I am convinced the authors had their reasons. If they're uncertain about what they're posting they can and will ask for suggestions, I think.

As a non-native English speaker I wouldn't dare commenting on lyrics negatively anyway, but when I read these I simply liked them.

Maybe I'm wrong, but I hear a lot of the sixties in that song. I always like your voice and the way you use it.

So, even though things aren't especially going the right direction for the guy (you) the song is anything but depressing.

It's more: Yep, that's the way it went then. Far too often. But what the heck, that was 50 years ago cool

I liked it a lot, and so did my feet.

Take care,


Stefan

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