Hi, all:

So, I’ve updated the mix and overall am feeling a little better about the end product—at least, it’s as far as my limited skills can take it. If I could figure out how to update my original post I may have kept the link to both versions for comparative purposes, but as it stands, the link above takes you to the new version.

Following on my December 9 post, here’s what I ultimately changed:

The drums: I’ve played with them a bit more—not sure they are any better, but hopefully. I also increased the volume on the rides so a bit more pop going into the choruses.

The vocal harmonies: I’ve added a high harmony, panned left, on the choruses and the bridge crescendo.

Guitars: I ended up not adding any new or different guitars. After trying a few, it muddied things more than making the tune edgier. What I did do is give the Hardrock LA Crisp a bit ore of a prominent role, having it kick in on the second half of the intro. I then took the Rock Heavy 8ths guitar, and per Floyd’s suggestion, read two tracks panned far left and right.

Bridge: I dialed down the guitars in the bridge to give it a bit more space in that section.

All in all, pretty subtle changes from the original, but hopefully additive to both those who liked it as is, and those who were looking for a bit more (like myself).

Al-David and J&B: Thanks for the listen and the feedback. Hopefully my changes didn’t muck things up too much.

My best to all of you,

Deej