Sounds good!

I won't speak to the topic, but there are places where you play the pronoun game so quickly that I've got difficulty trying to figure out who you're addressing:

      be honest at last Who, me? Or the lying government?
      you need no cash Who, me? Or "you" in the abstract? Because I do need money. wink
      but ONE folk "ONE" folk instead of money?
      repeat it but loud Repeat what loud? "ONE Folk?"

Then again, I'm often easily confused by lyrics.

And there's a rule that rock songs must not be grammatically correct, right? laugh

-- David Cuny
My virtual singer development blog

Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?