Hi, Mark.

The first third had a very Tom Waits vibe. The transition was a bit MIDI-ish, and the guitar interlude was unexpected.

The increasing percussion and dissonance worked nicely, and the violin helped hold the piece together.

The ending was effective.

I think it matched your as well as one can expected music to.

But there wasn't that much a sense of space, which (to my ears) made it sound more synthetic.

I hope that was helpful! smile


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Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?