The intro made the think it was going to be a '60s style song.

To me, this sounds like a vocal + strummed guitar song as the main backbone.

That you chose not to go that direction was confusing, because I kept waiting for it to appear.

However, since I probably at least a couple of decades out of date on pop music, I'd take any feedback from me with a huge grain of salt.

Not commenting on the song itself, just on the arrangement.


-- David Cuny
My virtual singer development blog

Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?