The string thing on the left is, sort of, redundant...all it does for me is to bring Pachelbel's Canon into the story every now & then.
The style of the solo & it's tone are a tad too cliche for me.
The bones are good, I'd like to read the lyrics to get further into the thing.
It does sound like a basically mono song with a couple of outliers.

I think it'll be good...the draft vocals are not too shabby either.

Cheers
rayc
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