Did some experimenting with the audience. Had to decide to ask them to shut up during the song; they just got too noisy and ruined the song

I did some extra eq-ing on the drums and bass, cutting the sub-low. I reworked the vocals, changed the eq, dropped the compression and changed the reverb. In the mastering I reworked the eq a little and changed the level of the convolution reverb to get a better live-sound feel.

For those who want to hear the "final cut" : Here's the song I entered in the contest

This time I had it hosted on "Hyves" a Dutch socual network. Halfway down the page on the left side you will find the soundplayer. There are also some pictures on the page.

Thank you all for taking the time to listen and to comment.