Coming on strong with this one to close out the year! I think if you had used fewer chords, like one chord per measure, this arrangement would've been smoother. I could be wrong, but it sounds like you are using two chords per measure or more. Nothing wrong with that per se, but for the mood of this piece, less busy would've been better. But don't get me wrong, you did a lot of good here and the overall feeling the listener takes away is a definite positive.

I think you and I have a lot in common singing. When I use my soft voice, it is whispery (as rayc has described it). However, I also have a gravelly voice that I feel real fake about using, but sometimes works. My point, you may want to try completely different styles of singing if you haven't already.

Great job, look forward to more good things from you in '22!


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