I'm getting a Neil Diamond vibe from your song, vocal recording/performance is very good...
Thanks, Bloc-head. Neil Diamond--I'm in good company then,
We like it as is.
We agree with Marty re the campfire feel. Good musicians sitting around playing something they feel.
We also felt Misha gave an insightful and positive review that we also much agree with.
And not because he threw an appreciated shoutout to Bud

All meaning we don't agree with your paragraph of negatives!
J&B
Janice and Bud, thank for the positive vibes!
Sounds good to me man!
Hey, I could hear many different versions of this, and I think you should experiment with many styles just for fun to see what happens. Ya never know.
It might be cool to hear a slightly slower piano up front version just for grins.
Thanks, Dave. I've tried many different styles, even slower one, but they just didn't hit the mark for me,
I think the style is great...there's a bit of a tension between the style and the lyric content that I think is cool...your vocal is really great and the mix sounds fine to my ears...I love songs in this tempo range...and I do agree with others about the harmonica stepping into the vox's territory... enjoyed it very much...Dan
Thank you, Dan. I appreciate your feedback.