My only suggestion would be to tweak the top end of each instrument as it gets a little bright verging on strident as it builds.
Absolutely, I will tend to that forthwith*. Don't know how I let it slip the first time, I guess it was late and my sleepy brain needed the treble buzz.
True Confession: This is probably the result of overreliance on Izotope presets. I need to get in there and do more thingies with the doodads.
Thanks, Ray.
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* Done, or at least attempted, in the currently linked "golden" version.