Hi, Mark.

Normally, if that much work goes into a song, it's probably better to repost it. Otherwise, it's likely to be missed by people who have commented on it, and might not realize it's been reworked.

I'm talking about people like me, of course. wink

There are a few points where the recorder is masked by the piano.

The middle section didn't work that well for me, mostly because I wasn't a fan of the brass patch. That's not a suggestion that it needs to be changed, though.

The huge reverb at the end was a bit jolting, but less so than other things you've posted. laugh

Pretty tune, engaging counterpoint. This works really nicely.

-- David Cuny
My virtual singer development blog

Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?