Normally, if that much work goes into a song, it's probably better to repost it. Otherwise, it's likely to be missed by people who have commented on it, and might not realize it's been reworked.
Yeah, I anguished about that, but in the end I decided against a new thread so as to not hog shelf space. It seemed uncool to have
Clorox Demo and
Clorox Golden Master on the bleach shelves at the same time. It's a tricky issue.
I'm talking about people like me, of course.
Which means you're interested and for that I thank you once again.
There are a few points where the recorder is masked by the piano.
Sigh. I try! I do, but then I give up. Every now and then a single note just disappears in the mix and I cannot pull it back out. This is an ongoing challenge I am working on, and I thank you for not letting me skate on this.
(Who was that "masked" man?) The middle section didn't work that well for me, mostly because I wasn't a fan of the brass patch. That's not a suggestion that it needs to be changed, though.
That horn part is kind of dear to my heart, so I wouldn't give it up. But I am sure I could have rendered it better.
The huge reverb at the end was a bit jolting, but less so than other things you've posted.
For some reason, the trick of tacking that on felt like an old-fashioned vinyl thing. Now I'm thinking: next time I'll have a repeating play-out groove. I'll have a short phrase repeat for like a half hour, so the listener will be forced to manually interrupt play, just like with a turntable! I love this idea. I will be sure to include a warning. =8^)
Pretty tune, engaging counterpoint. This works really nicely.
Thanks, David.
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