sync placement..... getting into a movie or TV show and yep I agree.

I listened first on the computer and then on my good buds on my phone. Nicely done. So.... my 2cents worth. I'd back the instruments down just the slightest. I think the singer needs to be "on top" of the music just a bit more. A second tip.... maybe someone else can listen to verify.... but I think with the content and topic.... she needs to sound more intimate or personal. Maybe a rounding of the upper mids and highs would give you that combined with the previously mentioned put her on top. Of course, I've only listened twice..... I'll listen again on my living room buds later tonight and update this.

You have a really good song and could easily be submitted for sync as is. A good library should be all over this

Edit: listened on my living room buds. Yep... Her voice should be warmer and a little bit more up front. This is a minor nit but well worth considering before submitting it to a library. If you don't plan on commercial use ... It's good as is.

Well written, well sung, well done.

Last edited by Guitarhacker; 01/17/22 11:51 AM.
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