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Bit gospel like mood in this sad story, worth telling to give perspective to the aging. Nicely flowing melody.

Very good arrangement, nice peaceful start. The vocal like synths sound very nice. Good drums, timpani adds interest, I was wishing to hear some tuba as well smile I really like the melancholy solo at the end, it's a good way to leave the best part to the last so it's now stuck in my head. Great vocals that fit perfectly with the message.

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Lovely song and idea, Peter.
Not sure about the big production in the chorus but that's my personal taste.

My only suggestion is in this verse:

God hasn’t called me home
But I guess it won’t be long
Did I mention that I’m ninety-two?

Try speaking the last line like, "Oh and did I mention that I'm ninety two".

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Originally Posted By: Rustyspoon#
Peter & Leon,
Sad, but well written tune. Very good lyrics(!) & performance, both vocals and guitar.
I will go with Dave B. thought on a mid solo. Clear mix and listens easy. Thank you for sharing.

Misha.


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Originally Posted By: BabuMusic
Wonderfully written, well said, and perfectly developed and presented. Love those lyrics, Leon, and a good vocal surrounded by interesting harmony. Hey, Peter, God needs your amazing versatility in God's band.


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Originally Posted By: justanoldmuso
nice vocal clarity. song works well.
"cantankerous"...<< good one.
you know what ? this would be wonderfull with femme vocs
doubling your vocs in the chorus.
happiness to you.
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om


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Originally Posted By: floyd jane
Leon & Peter,

Good write. Great idea! Thought provoking in a good way...

Nice vocal.

Good arrangement. Opening guitar is a great sound. Cool build at the chorus (timpani is nice - drums are interesting, too).

Good mix.

Really nice outro guitar.

Worth many listens.

fj


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Immediately recognized that Picked Acoustic......I have that plugin too and like it A LOT!! This is a really cool write......very interesting lyric........I guess it's kind of a play on " the good die young". Always enjoy you guys!! And Peter's guitar is always killer!!! Take care. Greg

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Hello Peter
Really good song
Great melody
Great singing
Great solo at the end
Very good work, Peter
Many greetings
Andi ;-)

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Originally Posted By: Birchwood
Hi Peter,

I think it's not only God doesn't want you up there. Me neither.
As long as you make these nice songs it's alright to stay here and entertain us/me.

It is a very nice song with a surprising angle in the lyrics.
I enjoyed it a lot. Nothing to complain about. Just enjoying it...

Hans


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Originally Posted By: musician17
Extraordinary, in every way. My sincerest congratulations - this is a masterpiece.


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Originally Posted By: NigelSpiers
Hi Peter & Leon,

Good song - I particularly liked the Lyrics and the chorus.

I agree with Dave - I would like a lead break of some sort in the middle for a bit of light and shade but otherwise the mix is great.

Well done.

Best Regards
Nigel


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Originally Posted By: rayc
Good narrative, good melody and a good arrangement...all combine to make a REALLY good song.
I'd love to hear another solo.


Thanks Ray - I'll add an extra minute or two to solo on the next one!

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What a fresh viewpoint you found for this song. Well done. Good write. You have very distinct vocals. Nice. Good one here.


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Originally Posted By: Torrey Bliss
Lovely rich sound Peter and Leon! Great use of those Orchestral sounds! Rather Beatle-esque in places! Heart wrenching lyrics that most folks grapple with at one time or another! I would like to think otherwise that the old man found peace in the end if the tune was based on a real story! I always enjoy your work! Thanks, Torrey


Torrey,

It was based on a true story Leon overheard the conversation in a coffee shop.

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Originally Posted By: jannesan
Bit gospel like mood in this sad story, worth telling to give perspective to the aging. Nicely flowing melody.

Very good arrangement, nice peaceful start. The vocal like synths sound very nice. Good drums, timpani adds interest, I was wishing to hear some tuba as well smile I really like the melancholy solo at the end, it's a good way to leave the best part to the last so it's now stuck in my head. Great vocals that fit perfectly with the message.

Janne


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Tuba would be interesting....

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Originally Posted By: vicarn
Lovely song and idea, Peter.
Not sure about the big production in the chorus but that's my personal taste.

My only suggestion is in this verse:

God hasn’t called me home
But I guess it won’t be long
Did I mention that I’m ninety-two?

Try speaking the last line like, "Oh and did I mention that I'm ninety two".

Vic


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Hi Peter,

Really beautiful song.
Very good lyrics and your vocals sound so well!

Rob and Anne-Marie


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Originally Posted By: Greg Johnson
Immediately recognized that Picked Acoustic......I have that plugin too and like it A LOT!! This is a really cool write......very interesting lyric........I guess it's kind of a play on " the good die young". Always enjoy you guys!! And Peter's guitar is always killer!!! Take care. Greg


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Originally Posted By: jptjptjpt
What a fresh viewpoint you found for this song. Well done. Good write. You have very distinct vocals. Nice. Good one here.


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Hello Peter
Really good song
Great melody
Great singing
Great solo at the end
Very good work, Peter
Many greetings
Andi ;-)


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Hi Peter,

Really beautiful song.
Very good lyrics and your vocals sound so well!

Rob and Anne-Marie

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