Wow, great lyrics with an outstanding vocal and very good backing track.

I agree with Russ that harmonies during the chorus would be a nice addition. Also I would like to hear a more intricate and/or varying leads between the chorus and the verses. That would put it over the top for me. However this is excellent as is and it’s going into my keeper folder.


Dad, how will I know when I've become an adult.

When your day is ruined because they rearranged the grocery store.

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