Originally Posted By: floyd jane
moto,

Nice guitar. Good, moody vocals.

fj


Thanks FJ,
Appreciate your comments

Originally Posted By: Torrey Bliss
Captain,

That slow moping rhythm/backtrack is the perfect vehicle for the subject matter!

Excellent vocals and an excellent job with the instrumental performances!

Thanks, Torrey


Thanks you sir,
I usually try to make the instruments compliment the vocals....I did say try:)

Originally Posted By: dcuny
Argh... "languid", "dark" and "moody" are already used to describe the vocals, and I'm all out of adjectives.

I like the "ticking" effect of the drum. The acoustic and electric guitars work really nicely here.

Some songs work well with less, and this is one of them.

Cool! smile


Thanks David,
That constant timing was purposeful, glad you picked up on that.

Originally Posted By: TuneMonger
Such a simple track but so, so effective! Good voc and the backing was perfect to frame the lyric. Well done!


Thanks,
Most of my stuff is fairly simple, sometimes it works.

Last edited by CaptainMoto; 01/26/22 09:12 AM.
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