https://soundcloud.com/user-770148857/25-and-stuck

Here's my latest. Thanks for any comments, good or bad. I'm particularly interested in comments about the storyline.

RTs:
387:Bass, Electric, Metal Ev 085
1856:Cello, Background PopCountry Ev 085
639:Guitar, Electric, Rhythm HardRockThrash Ev 085
642:Guitar, Electric, Rhythm HardRockThrashHollow Ev 085
RockThrashHalfTimeEv16^1-a:Snare, Bell Ride , b:Snare, Crash Ride

The singer is Jamie Jordan from fiverr

Lyrics:

Guess you could say I'm shallow
Just a red blooded guy
There was this girl in high school
And who the hell was I?

Born to be a prom queen
Everybody loved that girl
What would make a guy like me
Think she'd rock my world

Well, I wanted that girl so bad
That it's stayed with me for years
I know that's a sorry state
And brother it sears sears sears.

I wanted that girl so much
Or at least somebody like her
I wasted my days
Imagining me beside her

Now I was born, it seems, to be a lonely guy
So I can't blame her existence No sirree
But late at night when I watch the tube and I'm all alone,
There's always her face, her face, her face, looking back at me

Oh, I wanted that girl so bad
That for years my life's been muck
Of all my early days,
She's what stuck

I wanted that girl so much
Or at least somebody like her
I wasted my days
Imagining me beside her

Windows 11, Intel Core I5 10400, 16 gig ram, Scarlett 2i2, Sony Acid Music Studio 10, BIAB 2020 UltraPlus Pak