David,

An excellent listen. A good write.
("..not sure why it's so much work to string a bunch of cliches together." - HA! funny...)

The instrumentation is exceptional. Drums and Bass dominate with just the right amount of coloring from other instruments - the classic Pop formula, done to perfection!

The mix is solid.

You keep notching those singers higher with each new song. Impressive.

LOVE!!! the chorus!!!
...with one caveat.
The last line "leaves you hanging". It's too short.
I NEVER make songwriting suggestions to people (I view this forum to be about production, not songwriting)...BUT...
I wanted that last line to continue/extend...simply repeat it..
"It's time to fly... time to fly....fly...."
(and that last "fly" could be "echo-y")

COOL stuff. Well done.

fj