Originally Posted By: Alexander Paul
I think the mix is really good for a demo! I like arrangement and singing style. Maybe a solo or something in the later part of the song for some variation could be a good idea since it's is almost five minutes?


I thought about adding a solo but it's already nearly 5 minutes long---I didn't want to make it any longer.

Though perhaps I could cut a verse. Something to think about. Thanks for listening!

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