The mandolin works a treat.
Those long notes are ACE!
The line
"Playing in the parks and at every open mic"
sounds like there's a mismatch between lead and bvox...may need to excise a word, perhaps "at", for better flow or slice and slide to get it 100%.
I think it's a charming song Deej. Cool narrative, excellent vocals, terrific melody.
Well done.


Cheers
rayc
"What's so funny about peace, love & understanding?" - N.Lowe