A song should be as short as possible... but no shorter! And this song isn't too long.

I wouldn't describe you as someone having "small talents", and this song proves the point.

The arrangement is great - the mandolin is standout - but it's the vocals that sell the song, and it keeps my attention throughout the song.

I like that it's Momma's guitar, and not Daddy's guitar - a nice change from expectations.

At 3:50, the balance of the vocal is a bit off in an otherwise stellar mix.

Love the ending! laugh


-- David Cuny
My virtual singer development blog

Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?