"Have at it" - a slight development of "have at thee" from Bill Wobblestick.
The lyric is a very interesting story and it works pretty well...there are a couple of spots where it's slightly stilted laguage but poetic lic. is important otherwise the language wouldn't develop.
Your singing is quite good and your performance quite "proper".
The delay seemed a bit much for the 1st verse but I was used to it & it was more "absorbed" as the band filled in the spaces.
Good one!


Cheers
rayc
"What's so funny about peace, love & understanding?" - N.Lowe