Hello Mark,

I can agree with David (above).
The music is very attractive. Very well performed. It's nice and funny how you ended the song with that guitar.
Your vocals are very good, although I had to get used you sing in a slow, lazy way with prolonged vowel sounds.
Mostly downwards. It's a style I know, but I like to hear some 'hope' if you know what I mean.

Hans


Hans Berkhout
(Birchwood)
https://soundcloud.com/user-296497130