Hi Gary,

I like this song very much! Nice story, a very nice band and the singing is done very good!
I only thought (somewhere after 1,5 minute) that your vocals were too monotone.
And while I was thinking that, you continued the song 'in an overdrive' where your vocals varried much more.
That gave the song such a twist that I noticed by myself I then liked your whole song.
So the build-up of the song was very good (after all).

Have a nice day,
Hans


Hans Berkhout
(Birchwood)
https://soundcloud.com/user-296497130