I really like this. To me it is interesting to hear what people did all the way in the beginning of their arc.

If you had told me you wrote this yesterday I would have believed it.

That is not to say it is too old or too young. But it is "characteristic."

It is just very interesting to me that you have a knack for these "heart-tugging" hooks that seems to have been with you from the beginning, and you have a few similar themes that run through a lot of your work--at least to me.

It is not exactly "redemption"--but more like "Hey, let's try to have a redemptive take on this situation, honey, since we don't have much to lose."

Or something like that, I think.

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Good one man.