Hi Dave and Marty,

King of Blues! That's how we must call you two.
Marvellous song, with a very nice lead and bass and that bright sounding drums.
And the lyrics? Blues need this kind of dejection. One can (almost) identify with the main character and take another sip of rum...

I have one minor thing, no one yet mentioned it, so it is a matter of taste I presume, but I would see your vocals more upfront.
The instruments are louder compared with the vocals and I couldn't understand clearly what you were singing about. Was a bit depressing for me, but that's what Blues does...

So really, this is another great song from your hand(s), but stay modest!

Hans
(when do you come to Holland?)


Hans Berkhout
(Birchwood)
https://soundcloud.com/user-296497130