Originally Posted By: Torrey Bliss
Floyd,

You may have been just a pup back in 1980, but you were writing like a seasoned veteran! Every single chorus you write is memorable and sticks like glue! Your vocal in this is as good or better than any of your work! The background vox are sitting so sweet in the mix that I had to mention it!

A wonderful production from start to end with everything where it should be!

Thanks, Torrey


Thanks for the terrific review, Torrey. Much appreciated...


Originally Posted By: David Snyder

I really like this. To me it is interesting to hear what people did all the way in the beginning of their arc.

If you had told me you wrote this yesterday I would have believed it.

That is not to say it is too old or too young. But it is "characteristic."

It is just very interesting to me that you have a knack for these "heart-tugging" hooks that seems to have been with you from the beginning, and you have a few similar themes that run through a lot of your work--at least to me.

It is not exactly "redemption"--but more like "Hey, let's try to have a redemptive take on this situation, honey, since we don't have much to lose."

Or something like that, I think.

smile

Good one man.


Thanks, David. As I listen to this, I hear "the old me"" as a "developing" writer (although a lot of who-I-am as a writer was beginning to form, there was more to come in the developing stage). Glad that it at least "still holds up"....



Originally Posted By: rayc
You were probably born humming a brand new tune Floyd.
BIG band this time but it doesn't sound BIG in the overblown, overly busy sense.
The arrangement fits the tune like it ought.
Sweet melody, strong vocal delivery and another narrative that digs into the differences that bring/hold folk together.


Thanks, ray. As I said earlier - when I have a long list of RTs, they are often used as pieces and parts - and seldom all happen at once... Thanks for your continuing support...

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