Originally Posted By: bloc-head
Awright! I didn't have to suffer thru that awful Firehouse Subs Commercial that time...
The Guitars & Drums sounded bad-a$$... The Bass performance could be cleaned up a bit (too busy, timing issues) I'd love to hear a simpler Bass part, dead-nuts with that Kick... Did I mention, I love the Lyrics..! Vocals work fine... Way Cool Tune.

bloc-head,
Thanks.
I used a simple bass line for one section of the song to test out that possibility and for contrast. It remains as it was a decent contrast but, for me, didn't work across the song.
Timing wise...I did a fair bit of slicing & dicing to get the bass n drums together...if they don't sound that way then I've goofed somewhere. I'll listen again for any timing errors. As to the bass being busy - it, for the most part, follows the guitar except for the occasional run between otes. In fact it the only time it is "busy" is during the chorus as the other sections are very simple chord movements - I think. I will relisten with your comment in mind though.
Sometimes "awful Firehouse Subs Commercial" is all I can manage vocally.

Cheers
rayc
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