Hi, Bob.

I like the song and vocal a lot!

It sounds like you're asking for feedback, so here are some comments to ignore. wink

The intro sounds it's for a blues song, so it feels a bit out of place - at least, coming in that early.

The arrangement feels like it's overwhelming the vocals in the mix. Then again, I usually mix my vocals much to hot, so take that with a grain of salt.

It also feels like there's a disconnect between the mix and the vocals - like the singer's singing to a different backing track. I sort of wonder what it would sound like with a more up-tempo backing, despite the lyrics.

Anyway, really nice song! laugh


-- David Cuny
My virtual singer development blog

Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?