Originally Posted By: MarioD
I agree with David.

Maybe a pop backing track would fit better.

However this is an excellent start. I like the vocal and lyrics.

This is a good song but has the potential to be a fantastic song.


Thanks Mario and David -- I am starting over-- I updated the song to be a simplier one for now. Looking for Pop styles and see what i can find to fit-- feel free to suggest too.

Last edited by ChicagoBob; 02/26/22 01:58 PM.