Originally Posted By: AudioTrack
An interesting topic.

Musically, just continually repetitive with little variation throughout.

Thanks AudioTrack,
I can rely upon you for this sort of analysis.
Repetition is a good right? "Repetition makes it true" after all.

It's a simple verse, prechorus, chorus construction with a basic melody build on chord tones.
It's certainly not constructed from jazzy extended/augmented chords or an exotic form.
I write to my limited abilities to play...I try not to use BIAB to guild my Bulbine Glauca.

I can live with writing simple things and being stodgy in the eyes of some, even many.
It is fun to write, play and post my songs and to then read the responses, suggestions and recommendations of other writers and players.

You might note, for future use, that "just" is redundant within your comment as are the last three words of that same sentence.
You'd have had more impact, and save the reader's time, since the case isn't advanced, by writing "Musically: continually repetitive." Even then "continually" isn't required unless the writer feels the need to amplify their thoughts. Perhaps something like "fruitless monotony" would serve.

Few things is life are constant, fewer still are reliable, so it does my heart good to know that you're ready, willing & able to insert a little passive aggression into any thread. Your contribution, as always, is welcome.

Stay safe
Stay well.

Last edited by rayc; 03/08/22 12:05 AM.
Cheers
rayc
"What's so funny about peace, love & understanding?" - N.Lowe