Hi, Brad.

      like, are you really trustin’ in the Lord? No.

Ha! laugh

I understand the problem you're trying to address by not being accusatory. I think you did an excellent job addressing it here:

      As I’m standing here lookin’ in the mirror,
      that camouflaged Christian looks a lot like me


But... I think you could do this without changing the POV, along the lines of:

  • Are you really trustin’ in the Lord? No, and I should know!
  • I can see through your camouflage because that used to be me
  • I invite you to join me in stepping into the light

Just a thought. Sorry about your hard drive. Hopefully you've now got regular backups? (I say this not having done a recent backup myself).

As others have said, you're clearly a talented musician, writer and singer, and it comes through in this song.

I really liked the song! smile


-- David Cuny
My virtual singer development blog

Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?