Eddie,

That may be where you are going terribly wrong.

I heard a really funny recording some years back of a Rolling Stones song writing session captured in the studio.

Billy Preston kept playing this clever riff over and over and over and all the while Mick Jagger was just babbling gibberish into the microphone...until..

"And I miss you...yeah...

"And I'm walking Central Park...singing after dark...yeah...and I miss you!"

Maybe you should try it. Just sayin' man.

David Snyder
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