Originally Posted By: jannesan
Some may admire the beast, but you got inspired and that's healthy anger management. Good groove, good band with nice "soft-punk" approach, although the subject of your song would need harder treatment.

Janne


Thanks, Janne!
Originally Posted By: Guitarhacker


Nice punk feel to it. Creative and imaginary lyric writing.
What's not to like about that?


Here's another verse for you.

A senile disaster in Afghanistan
A couple of laptops prove you're the "big man"
Bumbling into world war three without a plan.

I might just have to write something like this..... there's certainly enough grist.



I think you are on to something good. Write it. I can't wait to hear it.

Originally Posted By: floyd jane
Clever, well written lyric.
A message that need to be heeded (but likely won't by those who need to)

Nice Grungy BAND.

Good attitudinal vocal.

I like it.

fj



Thanks, Floyd!