Hi floyd,
What wonderfully inspiring writing, performing and producing!
Everything about this is top-tier, first-class listening.
I love how the chorus takes a mere two words, "you say...", to change it's perspective so that what were the singer's words in chorus 1 becomes the words of "you" in chorus 2. I also loved how you slowed the lyric's flow in the second-last line of the chorus. This was both excellent musical contrast and an excellent way to shine spotlights on the title in the last line.
I thoroughly enjoyed the journey.
All the best,
Noel