David,

LOVE the BAND!
Those drums are SO interesting.

Your singer sounds great! Harmonies are really nice, too.

A good write.
"Once I belonged; now it's all gone
I'm back on the outside looking in"
Nice!!

Cool melody. (at "blink of an eye" it "lost me" for a moment).

I really like what you've done with the piano.
I wanted the acoustic guitars to have a bit more high-end EQ to cut through the mix more.
(the rest of the mix is good).

Always enjoy reading your writing notes...

Good stuff.

fj

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