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Hi Vircan,
very sweet composition with very pleasant harmony and vocals. And I also like the guitar solo. Well done.
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Derochette
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Cheers David.
Appreciated.
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Her nice smokey voice is excellent. Wish you had included the lyrics.
You did a good job with the remake. That process is never easy.
The solo lead was nice ... wondering which RT it is?
Enjoyed it!
J&B
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I think you have done a wonderful job with this! First of all, I really like the song, and love that vocalist. Mix for me is spot on, good choice of guitars, and they are sitting just where they need to in the mix. Nice job getting that lead guitar to do just what it needs to do during the fills, not always that easy when dealing with Realtracks. So, how did the shed turn out? 
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There's a touch of Sade in the vocal - there's alos a touch too much sibilant & other noises.
I like the backing - simple and effective to carry the vocal.
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rayc
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Thank you BlueAttitude.
The voice is quite haunting, I thought. The shed is work in progress.
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Vic,
Well, I obviously have no idea how the original version sounded . . . but this is really solid. Haunting, with a 90s alternative feel to it. I think the mix is solid . . . hate to disagree with Misha (who has a great set of ears), but I’m listening to this with headphones on and it sounds just right to me. Any louder and I think you’d overtake the soft, but haunting vocal. Seriously great job on the resurrection. Superbly done!
Hope all is well in your world.
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Thanks for pointing it out Ray.
Took the sibilance down a notch.
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Hi Deej
To be fair to Misha I have since followed some of his suggestion.
Thanks for your support.
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Vic,
Very good song. Sounds great to me.
Bob
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HI Vic ...
Terrific resurrection. I've resurrected several of Di's song in a similar manner. You nailed it! Her words a re a bit to discern at times but she sure has that sexy, haunting voice that's captivating. Good job in all respects. Take care ...
Alan
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Hi Al and Di
I hope you are well.
Couldn't do much with the vocal clarity. Unable to contact her to change it.
Thank you for listening.
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Thanks for the comments Janice and Bud.
The lead guitar is Brent 3521
Lyrics are:
Blue and Yellow © John Vaughan 2022
VERSE
Last night the sky turned red
In sadness, the moon and stars closed their eyes
A mother caressed her child in her bed
Spoke words of comfort, she knew could be lies
VERSE
So tired she slept and dreamed
that they'd woken to a better world.
No longer the nightmare that had been
outside, children's laughter could be heard
CHORUS
Morning came, sleep had left their heads
Last night the sky had turned red.
One day after a million tears are shed
The sky will glow, blue and yellow above their heads
VERSE
Spring flowers should now have bloomed
but not one blade of grass she saw outside
Last year sweet flowers lit up the room
now all beauty has found a place to hide
BRIDGE
She held her child close to her breast
Whispered I love you darlin' with a kiss
Made a vow to her, it won't always be like this
CHORUS
The sky will glow, blue and yellow above their heads
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Great vocal
Super band
Outstanding mix
I really liked this
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Very nice of you to say, Mario.
Thank you.
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