Firesong:

First off, love the title —great play on "a life-well lived". Terrific, just terrific vocal—one small nit maybe: the “ch” in “each” in first line and “watched” in the second line, maybe lower your vocal volume on those notes just to reduce the sibilance a tad. There may be another couple of places where you can do the same (e.g., “patient” in the first line of the chorus). Not major at all—and just an optional adjustment, if you agree.

The electric guitar is fantastic . . . actually the entire arrangement is superb—really full and rich. Impressive work!

All my best,

Deej